《Tera Fitoor Jabse Chadh Gya [Completed✓]》Part 17
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Next day
Doctor Came out from operation threator
Shivaay: doctor om
Doctor: congratulation mr oberoi ki sergry successful ho gyi
Rudra: ham mil skte Hain
Doctor: ham unhe operation threator se room me bhej den uske baad aap unse mil skte par unhe kuch bolne mat dijiyega woh abhi bhi weak Hain
Tej: ok doctor
Om was shifted in room from operation threator
All went inside
Shivru hugged him
Om smiled
Jahnavi: mera bacha tu thik hai na
Om smiled and nodded
All hugged him
Doctor: ji ab aap sab jaiye patient ke room me jada log nhi reh skte
Shivaay: bade papa badi maa mom dad kali uncle aur komal Aunty aap log bahar chaliye mai Anika rudy Hain Yahan par
All elders went outside and sat
Om in weak voice: Shivaay g.gauri kahan hai
Shivaay: om Gauri Richa ke ghar hai
Om: woh nhi aayi
Anika: nhi om woh kal raat me ayi thi ajj Subah uske parents Yahan aa rhe the toh woh chli gyi uske parents ko shaq na ho isliye
Om: mujhe milna hai
Rudra: Kali uncle aur aunty ko lag rha hai woh college gyi hai agar woh achanak Yahan aa gyi toh unhe kya jawab denge
Om: nhi Mujhe meri Gauri se milna hai please Shivaay
Other side in Richa's home
Gauri: hame Omkara ji se milna hai
Sakshi: aise pagal mat ban Gaur wahan sabhi log Hain agar tu aise wahan gyi toh unhe shaq ho jayega
Richa: tu mere ghar hai yeh baat unhe nhi pata
Gauri crying: nhi hame milna hai
Just then bhavya get a call from Shivaay
Bhavya: Haan bhaiya
Shivaay: bhavya om Gauri se milne ki zid kar rha hai kya Karen
Bhavya: Haan bhaiya Didi bhi
Shivaay: ek kaam karo
He tells bhavya what to do
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Bhavya disconnected the call: chlo
Richa: Kahan
Bhavya: hospital
They four went to hospital
Shivaay and Rudra came out Shivaay told whole plan
Bhavya: bhaiya mai Richa and sakshi di yahan se jaa rhe Hain agar kisi ne dekh liya toh gadbad ho jayegi jab Gauri di bhaiya se mil lengi toh Rudy hame call kar dena ham unhe pick kar lenge
Shivaay and Rudra nodded
Trio went back
Rudra get trolly to ward
Anika: yeh kya kar rhe ho
Rudra: bhabhi yeh bhaiya ka nashta hai aur yeh O ke liye gift
Anika: gift
Rudra lift the clothes and shows Gauri
Gauri smiled seeing Omkara her eyes filled with tears
Om turned and opened his eyes and saw Gauri
He was going to sit but Gauri holds him
Om smiled: mujhe pata tha tum aogi
Gauri hugged him om hugged her back
Gauri: hamne bola tha aap mat jaiye lekin nhi
Om still in hugging position: Iss halat me hun phir bhi gussa karogi
Gauri: hamne bola tha na
Om: kuch nhi hua mujhe dekho i m fine
Gauri broke the hug: dikh rha hai kitna fine hai aap acche bol bhi nhi paa rhe hain
Shivikaru was watching them
Anika: kitna pyar krte hain na dono
Shivaay: Haan om ke liye iss se achi ldhki nhi hogi
Om again hugged her: tum ho na mera khyal rkhne ke liye
Gauri hugged him back: agar ainda se hamari baat nhi maani toh ek jhaap me diwar pe sata denge
Om: ae apne teacher ko daantogi
Gauri: teacher ko nhi apne pati ko daant rhe Hain
Om broke the hugg and kissed her forehead
Anika: ahhm ahhm (fake cough) om Gauri ham sab yahin hain
Gauri smiled
Just then Shivaay saw Jahnavi was coming towards room
Shivaay: oh no gadbad ho gyi
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Anika: kya hua
Shivaay: badi maa yahin aa rhi Hain
Rudra: ab kya karien
Shivaay: Gauri tum bed ke neeche chup jao
Gauri immediately sat under the bed
Jahnavi entered
Shivaay: bb..badi maa aap kuch kaam tha
Jahnavi: haan woh mai om ke liye soup lekar aayi thi
Anika: Ll..l.laiye Mai pila dungi
Jahnavi: nhi beta mujhe apne bache ko apne haathon se pilana hai
Just then she saw a duppata under the bed
Jahnavi: arre yeh duppata kiska hai
All eyes got widen
Anika: mm....mmm.mera h.hai
Jahnavi: Tumhara kaise ho skta hai tumne toh duppata phna hi nhi tha
Rudra: mera hai
Om eyed at him
Jahnavi: pagal ho kya tumhara kaise mai dekhti Hun
Om in mind: ye mom CID Kyu ban gayi
Gauri: phas Gaye bhagwan bacha lo
Jahnavi was going to see under the bed but Tej called her
Tej: jahnavi soup Anika pila degi tumne Subah se kuch nhi khaya chalo yehin paas me hotel hai
Jahnavi came back and give soup to Anika and left
All sigh of relief
Gauri came out Anika gave her soup
Gauri helped om to sit and she was feeding him
Om was staring at her
After sometime
Shivaay: papa log wapas aane wale hain Gauri i think u should leave
Rudra: mai bhavya ko call karta hun
He called bhavya
After sometime Bhavya entered in hospital
Bhavya saw om and went to him: Bhaiya aap theek hain na
Om smiled: jab mere paas itni pyaari behan Bhai ho aur itni pyaari biwi ho toh mujhe kuch ho skta hai Kya
Om hugged shivika ruvya and Gauri
Then all broke the hug
Bhavya: accha chlte hain ab mummy log wapas aa rhi hongi
Bhavya and Gauri left
Om: thank you so much mere bhaiyon
Shivaay: bhai ko thanks kon bolta hai Rudy
Rudra: mujhe nhi pata bhaiya
Om smiled
Guys i behope you like it. Today I was little free so I thought to write and give a surprise to you all
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