《Tera Fitoor Jabse Chadh Gya [Completed✓]》Part 24
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Next day
Rikara sangeet function
It's only ladies sangeet
All girls are preparing for ladies sangeet and men are sitting with bore expression
At night
Jahnavi: chlo ladhkiyon function start karte hain
All Ladies come to hall and sit .
Gauri look ☝️
(Guys expression par mat Jana look dekho 😁😁😁)
Pinky: oh saare mens Yahan se niklo chlo
Anika and Bhavya pushed all men to out of hall
Anika: aap log hall me aane ki himmat mat krna chlo by
All boys went
After sometime
Jahnavi: chlo ab program start karte Hain
Just then all boys again come with camera and video camera.
Rudra: ladies chlo dance start karo recording vale aaye Hain
Bhavya: oh hello yahan recording vale Hain so you can go
Shivaay: par Shaadi ki CD me toh dekhna hi hai iss se accha abhi live Dekh le
Anika: ji nhi nikaliye yaha se
Ranveer: Chalo yaar koi fayda nhi hai
Prinku: jaaiye
All were about to go just then Shivaay spoke
Shivaay: om kahan Gaya
All saw that om was sitting in front of Gauri and clicking her photos.Gauri was blushing
Jhanvi went and hold his ear
Om: ouchh!!!
Pinky: tujhe kya invitations cards dene padega chal nikal Yahan se.Aur Gauri tu Kya sharma kar photo khicha rahi thi. Mana nhi Kar skti.
Gauri make innocent face
Pinky: chlo ab niklo time mat waste Karo
Jahnavi pushed all boys
All boys come in a room
Shivaay: ab kya karien yaar
Tej: idea
Kaali: Kya
Tej told something
Shakti: bhai sahab kahin pakde gye toh
Om: mast plan hai
Other side
Jahnavi: chlo function start karo
Just then someone Ladies entered actually they are not ladies they are men (Omkara Rudra Shivaay Kaali Shakti Tej Ranveer) they are wearing saree 😂😂😂😂
Ladies: badhai ho badhai ho
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Pinky: aap log kon
Kali: ji Mai kalika (pointing to tej) yeh tejaswini (pointing to om) yeh omkali
(Pointing to shakti) shakeena (pointing to Shivaay) yeh Shivani
(Pointing to ranveer) yeh ravina
(Pointing to rudra) rudrika
Gauri: aap San ke naam bahut ache Hain. Par omkali ji aap bura mat manana aapka naam ajeeb nhi hai
Om in girl's voice: ha...ji..jj..ji
Shakti making girl's voice(cutting om): arre behnji.....arre..arre matlb bhabhi ji ham sab woh hain jo...Jo..Jo
Tej making girl's voice: arre arre program start karte hain na
Jahnavi: hmm
Om making girl's voice: phle ham ladhki ko badhai toh den de
Shivaay in mind: phansvayega pagal
Jahnavi: ji jaroor
All boys come to Gauri
All boys except omkara caressed her head
Om making girls voice: arre jldi hato mai bhi toh aashirwad de dun chand ke tukre ko
Rudra in low voice to om: O kyun awara ladhkon jaise words bol rhe ho.
Om comes to Gauri and sit on knees
Om making girl's voice: hayeee mai marjavan kisi ki nazar na lage.
He caressed her Cheek. Touch was familiar to her.
Om open his veil and Gauri was shocked. Om blink his eyes
Gauri in low voice: Omkara ji
Om hugged her: badhai ho . Badhai ho baby....mera matlb beti.
Jhanvi to Komal: ye sab ajeeb nhi lag rahi hain
Komal: haan saree bhi dhang se nhi pehni
Jhanvi pointing to tej : ye bahut moti nhi lag rahi
Komal pointing to Kali: yeh kuch jyada hi lambi nhi lag rahi
Pinky: in logon ne chehra bhi covers kiya hai
Jahnavi: abhi pta chl jayega
Tej to Kali: ye om Pol khol dega aaj kab se chipka hua hai
Kali: haan Chalo usko uthate hain
Tej in girls voice: arre om
All girls saw tej . Kali pinched tej
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Tej: .mmmm...mm.mera mtlb omkali
Chlo utho function bhi toh start karna hai.
To jahnavi: kyun baby...mm..mera mtlb bhabhi
Jahnavi: hmm
Anika in low voice: mujhe shaq ho rha hai in aurton par
Gauri in low voice: anika bhabhi yeh Sab aurten nhi mard Hain
Anivya and prinku and rishi shocked: kya
Gauri: haan hamne Omkara ji ko khud dekha
Priyanka: abhi batate Hain
Richa: ham song play krte hain Sakshi Prinku tum dono un Sab ko dance ke liye bulao.
Sakshi: haan chlo
Richa played the song
All boys come and start dancing like girls. All girls chukled.
All boys were busy in dancing just then Richa changed the song
Now all men throw their saree and lost in dance in men style
All men shouting: aapka kya hoga janabeali aapka kya hoga
All women eyes widen
Richa off the music
All men stopped
Tej: mar gye
But om was still dancing and singing
Om lost in dance: aapka kya hoga janabeali aapka kya hoga
Shivaay: om ruk ja om ruk
Om stopped
Om in girl's voice: kya hua Shivani
Shivaay: ab ham pakde gye
Om saw all girls were standing folding their hands on chest.
Om: gye kaam se
Anika: Shivani omkali rudrika tejaswini kalika shakina raveena toh aap sab ki pol toh khul gyi Hain na
Jahnavi holds Omkara's ears: besharm sabke saamne apni biwi ko gale lagata hai
Om: Mai toh omkali tha na
Pinky: oh my mata. Jaroor yeh idea Rudra ka hoga.
Rudra: nhi choti maa yeh idea papa ka tha
All women eyes got widen
Pinky: oh my mata jeth ji yeh ideas aapka tha
Tej showed his teeth😁😁😁: kitne kamal ke jeth ji mile Hain tumhe Hain na pinky
Jahnavi: itna behuda idea Rudra bhi nhi deta. Accha baccho tum sab ko kisne bataya in sab ki asliyat
Bhavya: Gauri di ne.
Om glared at her she shrugged her shoulders
Anika: chlo ab niklo
All men went from there
Program started.
All men were watching the program from kitchen window
Program end
Tej: chlo bacchon program khtm ho gya
All men went from kitchen
Precape: mehdi and haldi
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