《Book reviews *Requests Closed*》'The Cimmerian Knight' by SHEIFREDRICK
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Yeah, this story doesn't have that.
This story is about Aquila Adler, who is a witch. Not the kind that goes to Hogwarts, but a witch nonetheless. Anyway, Aquila goes to school in LA and there she discovers that the kind of magic she was born with is heavily altered. To unleash her original magic, she needs to find her blood-knight. A blood-knight is the person who is supposed to help the witch ot wizard in their life. We follow Aquila as she tries to find her blood-knight.
The plot is quite complex and I have to admit, I doubt I fully grasped everything that happened. However, it's pretty original and I feel like the author put quite some effort in coming up with it.
The characters are okay and developed enough so far, but I'm not quite feelling them yet. This might have to do with the author leaning towards telling instead of showing, but I also think it's because we still need to learn about them. The book only has three chapters, so I expect more to come!
The GPS starts out pretty shitty, but gradually improves. It's still not flawless, though. I mainly see punctuation mistakes and the switching of tenses, which is confusing for the readers.
The plot is interesting enough, but the story definitely needs editing.
Rating: 7
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