《Book reviews *Requests Closed*》'Sector 1' by alysha40025201
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'Sector 1', written by alysha40025201, is a story about sector 1 (out of 8), where the gap between rich and poor is huge. Justin lives on the rich side, experiencing the high life. Tanya lives on the other side, experiencing the lowest life. The story follows them through their lives.
The plot isn't the most original one I've ever seen, but it's acceptable. The whole low/high life sector thing has been done before, but that's not a bad thing. From what I've seen so far, I'm interested to see how the plot will develop.
The characters are decent and show enough personality for us to start thinking of them as people. I haven't seen a lot about them yet, but that's also because the story only has a few chapters. I hope we get to see them developing more in the future!
The GPS isn't always done correctly. I'd recommend editing, to make the experience easier for the readers.
So far, I'm wondering when and how Justin and Tanya will meet, which means it'll be interesting to see how the events play out. Well done!
Rating: 6.5
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