《KARNA - MAHADEV'S DECIPLE》CORONATION
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After the duel karna and Bheeshma left to freshen up. After two hours the Rajya sabha will be organised. Everyone was still talking about fight between them. The kuru vansha were especially intrigued. The Kauravas and Pandavas were talking among themselves about Karna. Parshuram went to palce for rest he decided to do coronation ceremony for karna. Adhiratha and Radha were also invited but the politely declined as they didn't want to cause problems. Crowd dispersed and royals went to palace.
In Duryodhana's chamber.
Duryodhana : Mitra Ashwatthama, kya vichar hai tum hara Karn ke vishay mein.
(Friend Ashwatthama, what do you think about karna.)
Ashwatthama : Mitra, Adbhoot Yodha hai Angraj karna. Maine abhi tak apne jeevan mein aisa romanchak dwandh nai dekha.
( Friend, he is a great warrior, till date I didn't saw such intriguing fight.)
Dussashan : Sahi kah rahe hai Ashwatthama jyeshtha.
( Ashwatthama is right elder brother)
Duryodhana (raised his eyebrows): Oh! Kya woh keval ek daridra suta nahi hai ab.
( Oh! Isn't he just Poor charioteer son now)
Dussashan : Hum sabhi ko apni galti ka bhan hai.
(We know our mistakes)
Duryodhana : Hmmm.
Ashwatthama : Hamein karna se mitrataa kr leni chahiye. Duryodhana tumhe Sinhasan dilane hetu eaisa Yodhaka humare paksh mein hona chahiye.
( We should be friends with him. Such powerful warrior should be on your side if you want throne.)
Shakuni who just entered.
Shakuni : Satyavachan, Dronputr. Bhanje, Ashwatthama sahi keh raha hai, karn koi sadharan Yodha nahi hai agar tum yuvraj banna chahte to use apne paksh ke n le lo.
(True word son of drona, nephew he right karna is not a simple warrior you should try and get him on your side)
Dhuryodhana : Woh toh main hi hai parantu kaise.
( That is alright but how)
Shakuni : Putra, Samarthyawan ke samarthya ko maan lo aur izzat do tum swam ko uska Mitra bana loge . Karna lalchi nahi hai warna aaj pratiyogita nahi hoti wo khusi se anga desh ka raja ban chuka hota. Gangaputr Bheeshma ke vachan khali nahi jata mere bachche.
(Respect the warrior's valour you wiil be his friend. Karna is not greedy as he could have become the king of anga easily with Bheeshma words there was no need for competition today. Bheeshma words carries such weight son)
Duryodhana : sahi keh rahe hai aap mamashree , Dussashan tum aur baki sab Karna se sambandh sudarane ka pyatn karo, ho sake to Kshama bi maang lo mai karna ko apne paksh mein chahta hoo. Ya kam se kam un Pandavas ke pask mein nahi.
( You are right uncle, Dussashan you along with other tries to mend relationship between Kauravas and karna. I want him on our side at least not on Pandavas side. Say sorry if necessary.)
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Dussashan : Ji jyeshtha.
( Yes, brother)
Ashwatthama : Uchit keh rahe ho Duryodhana. Mai bhi usse Mitrata karoonga, usne Aaj Pitashree ko yah sidh kar diya ki Arjun sarvashrest dhanurdhar nahi.
( Yes tatha right, I will also befriend him too. He broke father's declaration of Arjun being best archer)
Everyone laughed and and agreed. Kauravas were not evil. They were loyal to his eldest brother. Being ignored since by birth and considered as bad omen. They got love from only their elder brother. The will decent to hell if Duryodhana wishes them to be.
Pandavas were also talking about karna in Yudhishthir's room.
Yudhishthir : kya vichar hai tum sab ka.
(Why do you all think)
Nakul : Mujhe to abbi tak viswas nahi ho raha ki ek sutputra can fight at that level with pitamah
( I can't believe that a charioteer son can fight grandee at that level)
Arjun : Nakul tumhe Angraj karna ka upman nahi karna chahiye. Wo ek Yodha hai or Yodha ka koi gotra nahi hota.
( Nakul you shouldn't insult Angraj. He is warrior first and warriors don't have cast)
Bheem : Kya galat kaha Nakul ne? Kya yeh adharm nahi ki suta astra uthaye?
(What wrong did Nakul say? Isn't it wrong for son of charioteer to lift weapons)
Yudhishthir : Hai toh Parantu Arjun bhi anuchit nahi keh Raha.
(It is but Arjun is also isn't wrong)
Sahdev most intelligent of Pandavas, a great scholar among them who was listening to everyone.
Sahdev : Nahi jyeshtha Adharm nahi hai yeh, Varna vayvastha gun par adharit hai janm par nahi. Aur Angraj ke parakam ko undhekha nahi kiya jaa sakta.
( No elder brother, cast was based on talent and interest. Angraj valour couldn't be unseen)
Yudhishthir : Satya kaha tume Anuj. Aaj Angraj aur pitamah ke dwandh ke paschat Angraj ke shaurya aur pratibha ko thukraya nahi jaa sakta.
( Right you are little brother, we can't questions his abilities after today's duel)
Bheem : Yeh to Satya hai, Mai Angraj ke gada yudh se mohit hoon. Kitna bhi nakarna chahoon par uske pratibha ko maana padege. Sayad isi wajah se main krodhit hoon, mere kshatriya Gaurav ko thess pahunchi hai.
(Tht is true. I was impressed and attracted to his mace fight. This may be reason I an bitter, my ego was hurt.)
This is true for everyone present there. They had hard time excepting that someone is better than them the Devputras. Especially Arjun was most bitter. Bheem was the only one straightforward one to accept it. But Karna talent couldn't be ignored, so they decided at least have respectful behaviour towards karna. Seeing the atmosphere tensed Bheem decided to lighten the atmosphere.
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Bheem : chalo Bhojan kare, Mujhe Bhook lagi hai.
( Lets have lunch, I am hungry)
Everyone laughed went to eat. In Kunti's chamber kunti was crying in front of shivling happy that his eldest was alive but sad that she couldn't be a part of his life. For her other five sons reputation she decided to keep quiet again listening to priyamada her childhood friend and dasi who knows the secret and recornised Karna as Kunti's eldest son.
Bheeshma freshen up and came to his chamber. He wasn't surprised to see Vidhur, Dronacharya and Dhritarashtra in his chamber. He knew that upon seeing Karna talent they will surely have some questions for him, as he was one to have this idea so he must knew and hid Karna talent from them.
Everyone : Pranipat
(Hello)
Bheeshma : Pranipat.
(Hello)
Dronacharya : Toh Gangaputr, kya app suru se hi Karna se parichit the?
( So son of ganga, do you know of karna before)
Bheeshma : Haan, main kal subah kala pradarshan se poorv usse mila tha.
(Yes, I met him yesterday before exhibition)
Dhritarashtra : Toh Tatshree aapne humse yeh baat aur Karn ke yudh kala ke vishay mein bataya kyu nahi?
( Then uncle why didn't you told us before)
Bheeshma : Main Karna ke rankaushal se poornta parichit nahi tha? Mai Jaanta tha ki wo ek uttam Yodha hai parantu aaj jo hua wo mere sambhavna ke parey tha.
( I didn't completely knew the extent of his capabilities. What happened today was beyond my imagination.)
Dronacharya ( snorted) : Aap apne pure samarthya se nahi lade main maan hi nahi sakta ki wo sutputra aapko gada yudh aur dhanush yudh mein parast kr sakta hai. Kya wah sab logo ko uska pradarshan dikhane ke liye tha?
(You didn't fight your best. I don't believe a son of charioteer can defeat you in both mace and archery fight. Was it just for crowd)
Bheeshma : Haan, main poori khmata se nhi led raha tha Parntu mai jaanta hoon ki Karn bhi poori kshmta se nahi lad parha tha. Kya aapko uske shakti ka anumaan aur anubhav aaj krida kshetra main nahi hua.
(Yes, I didn't fihgt my best but Karna also didn't fight at his best. Didn't you feel his power during expedition.)
Everyone was quite, they didn't want to say but they all felt karna power today. It was especially difficult for Dronacharya, he knew none of students were upto paar with Karna not even his favourite Arjun. It was bitter pill to swallow for him, though he didn't say clearly but by acknowledging Arjun as best archer he also declared himself as best teacher. Seeing karna he knew he was wrong but didn't want to acknowledge it because of his ego. He desperately wanted to diminish Karna significance to others, by belittling Karna he was trying heal his bruised ego. This is the reason he is doing everything possible to question Karna. He in his heart wanted to know Karma's teacher and formed a one sided rivalry and disdain towards them. He wanted to know who were they who insulted their ancestor's teachings and taught a suta. He was angry at them.
Dronacharya :“ Kaun hai Karna ke guru? Kahan se prapt ki hai usne siksha? Kisne ek suta ko Shastra aur sastra ki diksha di? ” he was getting angrier.
Bheeshma : Yeh toh keval karna hi Jaanta hai.
Vidhur : Mujhe to ab bhi viswas nahi hota. Kya Karn sach mein suta hai. Itna samarthya, uske mukh ka Divya tej aur uske kavach aur kundal, yeh sabhi samanya nahi ho sakte Tatshree.
( I couldn't believe. Is he really a suta, that divine glow, the Armor they couldn't be ordinary.)
Bheeshma : Mujhe gyat hai Putra. Main is baat se nischit hue ki wo Adhirathaputr hai Adhirath ne yeh sare vishay mujhe varshon pehle bataya tha kintu maine unsuna kar Diya tha. Par Karna ka kavach dek mujhe Adhiratha ki baat ka smaran hua ho adhiratha ka Putra hi hai.
(I know but I also know he is Adhiratha's son,he told me about Karma's kavach long before but I forgot but today seeing kavach I remembered our conversation)
Conversation like this were going on everywhere. Two hours later Rajyasabha was organised and everyone was present there, maharaj Dhritarashtra was on his throne and other people were sitting around him even Duryodhana, Dussashan, Ashwatthama, Yudhishthir and Sahdev were also sitting in sabha. All the preparation of karna coronation was completed. Karna entered the sabha in white Dhoti and red angavastra. Everyone welcomes him. Lord Parshuram was there as the priest of ceremony.
Karna was asked to remove his angavastra and sat in giant plater of 5 metres radius, he did so. He sat down them chants begins then he was then showered with milk and rose petals. Then he was asked to wipe him off and change his dhoti to royal clothes arranged for him. Karna came back wering orange dhoti ans golden angavastra. Then karna had to wear ornaments and finaly Parshuram helped him to wear his crown. Karne touched his feet and was blessed by him. Karna coronation was completed. He went ahead and bowed slightly if front of everyone to show his respect.
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