《Hate But Love》14
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Now all the confusion all the misunderstanding everything was solved!!
Next morning....
Everyone was sitting in angaan for breakfast and raavi was feeding raashi...
Maa : maine pandit ji se baat kar li hai unhone kaha hai 4 din baad duper ko 12 baje ka acha Murat hai shadi ka....
Dhara : ye tho bhot achi baat hai maa....
Shiva : maa itne din hum....
Krish : (sings) milan abhi adha adhura hai milan abhi adha adhura hai....
(Everyone laughs and Shiva looks at raavi with a puppy face)
Raavi : koi baat nhi kaki....
Gombhi : Shiva tu kaam kar aaj ghar pe he rhe raashi aur raavi k sath time spent kar lena....
Shiva : par gombhi dukaan....
Dhara : dukaan mai chali jaungi....
Maa : tho jate jate mujhe bhi kanta k ghar chod dena...
Dhara : ji maa....
Krish : ye sahi hai....gombhi dev aur bhabhi dukaan ja rhe hai.....maa kanta kaki k ghar aur mai bhi college jaunga....(teasing) matlab Shiva aur Bhabhi ghar par akele honge....Shruti tum ek kaam karo tum bhi kahi chali jau tumhe q kabab mai kaddi bana hai??
Raavi : Krish aisa q bol rha hai usse....
Shiva : aa gadhede tere zubaan na kuch zada he chalne lagi hai....kahi bhi kuch bhi bolta hai....
Dhara : Shruti tu Krish ki baat ka bura mat Maan na....
(Shruti smiles)
Later everyone leaves only Shruti shiva raavi and raashi were at home.....
Raavi : Shiva mai khana bana deti hu tu plz raashi pe nazar rakhna....wo soo rhi hai....
Shiva : thik hai mai hu yaha.....
(Raavi goes in kitchen to cook food while Shiva sleeps with raashi in his room.....after raavi finishes cooking she comes in room and runs towards raashi picking in her in arms)
Raavi : (scared) Shiva!!
(Shiva wakesup listening to raavi's scared voice)
Shiva : kya hua raavi??
Raavi : Shiva maine tujhse kaha tha na raashi ka dhayan rakhne agar mai nhi aati tho wo niche gir jati aur usse lag jati....
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Shiva ; (confused) kya matlab??
Raavi : Shiva tu so rha tha aur raashi bed k edge pe aagyi thi......agar mai sahi time pe nhi aati tho.....
Shiva : aise kaise gir jati.....mai uske charo aur takiye (pillows) rakhe the....
Raavi : Shiva tu nind mai hai kya?? Tujhe pillows dikh rhe hai kya?? Shiva tu raashi ko lekar itna careless kaise ho sakta hai??
Shiva : raavi mai sach keh rha hu maine pillows rakhe the taki raashi gir na paye par pata nhi kaise....
Raavi : chod....maine tiffin pack kar liya hai tu de aa fir hum bhi khana kha lenge....
(Raavi leaves)
Shiva : mujhe yaad hai maine pillows rakhe the..... Shiva tu itna careless kaise ho sakta hai....
(Shiva goes and gives tiffin in shop.....later they sit in their room to have food.....raashi was playing on bed alone)
Shiva : sorry raavi pata nhi kaise mujhse itni badi galti hogyi....
Raavi : Shiva tujhe sorry bolne ki koi zarurat nhi hai....aur plz mujhe galat mat samjhna jabse hum alag hue hai tab se raashi he meri puri duniya hai.....usse zara si bhi taklif hoti hai ya hone wali hoti hai tho meri jaan nikal jati hai....
(Shiva kisses her forehead)
Shiva : janta hu.....aur mai promise karta hu aaj k bad mai aisi laparwahe kabhi nhi karunga.....
(Raavi smiles)
Shiva : waise Shruti kaha hai....usne khana kha liye??
Raavi : ha usne khana kha liya hai aur wo market gyi hai kuch saman lene....
Shiva : chal thik hai....
Raavi : Shiva mujhe na Shruti k liye bura lagta hai....wo hamesha se tujhe pasand karti thi fir bhi 2 saalo tak usne teri biwi hone ka natak kiya......aur ab achanak se mai wapis aagyi teri zindagi mai.....kaisa lagta hoga usse....
Shiva : janta hu raavi....par maine kabhi usse kuch nhi chupaya.....maine uski help lene se phele he keh diya tha ki raavi se bhot pyar krta hu aur chah kar bhi kabhi apni zindagi mai kisi aur jagha nhi de sakta......tab bhi wo Mera sath dene k liye maan gyi thi....janta hu uske sath galat ho rha hai par mai kya karu...???
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Raavi : tujhe pata hai wo keh rhi thi ki wo next week Somnath chod k ja rhi hai....
Shiva ; kaha jayegi wo?? Mera matlab uski tho koi family bhi nhi hai??
Raavi : wo keh rhi thi wo Mumbai ja k waha he koi job dhund legi .....
Shiva : chal acha hai wo bhi khush rahe....
Raavi : Shiva mai ye sab rakh k aati hu tu raashi k sath tab Tak khel Lena...
Shiva : hmm....
(After playing with raashi Shiva and raavi get tired so they all fall asleep.....raashi on Shiva's stomach and raavi on his chest....the three of them fall asleep hugging eachother)
In evening
Shruti comes to their room and smiles seeing them sleeping together
(Shruti leaves)
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