《I'LL COME BACK: A Narnia Fanfiction》Author's Note
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Calling all readers!!!
This is not an update I am so sorry ahahahaha anyways this book is kind of over... *cries*
Okay I know that I asked you guys if I should make a sequel, but I really don't know what to do. I have the sequel kind of written, unfortunately my overly imaginative Narnian mind just came up with a whole new plot for everything and to be honest, as compared to that 'new plot', this book's plot is crap. Like really crap. My writing style here is like crap as well.
Hence, I really need help from you guys!
I will be hosting a little voting session on my next step right here. I have a few options as to how I should proceed:
(a) Publish the sequel at one go (unedited), then publish the new book *I honestly don't recommend this as the sequel is plain weird :/
(b) Publish the new book and keep this one here (no sequel)
(c) Publish the new book and take this book down
I sincerely hope to make a choice that will cater to majority of my readers, so please do vote for one of the above 3 options by commenting! Thank you!
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