《Erotic Book Club (E.B.C) 2019》When You Realize You've Become a Mean Girl
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When You Realize You've Become a Mean Girl... and What Comes Next
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It isn't every day that you find yourself waking up and realizing "Hey, I'm a mean girl." I could make sure people like you didn't make their way into our circle and I was very good at it. You wanted to sit with us? No thank you. You wanted to talk to one of us? Sorry, no can do. You wanted to collaborate on a school project? I. Don't. Think. So... nothing personal. It's just, look at you and look at me? Do you really belong here?
That's the age-old question, isn't it? Do you really belong here? What does that even mean anyway? Of course, you belong here...right? You might be wondering why I'm telling you this. If you are patient I will explain. In order to tell you, I have to share some dark stuff. You might not want to hear it. If you don't, that's alright, I don't really care. I'm a mean girl after all. If you are interested in finding out how a person becomes "mean" than don't go anywhere. Things are about to get interesting...
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