The book for the next two weeks is:

The Will To Serve

Romance

Hotness

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Luna Weir's Dom, Jacob Dakota, never takes on a sub for more than three years. As the end date of the contract dictating their relationship agreement draws near, Luna finds herself unable to bear the thought of the end. The situation is worsened by the reappearance of Bryan Walsh, her first Dom who had previously ghosted her after a few sessions, sessions that Jacob suspected may not have taken Luna's limits into account. With the future of their relationship unknown and a suspicious Dom waiting in the shadows, Luna and Jacob must sort out their feelings in time before they lose each other forever.

Bdsm, sex, implications of abuse, anxiety

Descriptiveness, character development

Telling instead of showing, long-windedness

Please help me spot where I am telling and showing and especially when I am over-explaining. I'd also appreciate help in ensuring my cast of characters are diverse enough and the plot is believable. Lastly, I want to make sure I am doing the BDSM community justice and the main relationship doesn't end up being abuse disguised as D/s.

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You have a minimum of two weeks to read as many chapters as you can/want. We ask that you read a minimum of 3-5 chapters in order to get a good feel for the author's work. Once you've finished reading you may use the critique questions to guide you through your review and feedback.

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