The book for the next two weeks is:

Secret Pleasure

Warm

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She was kidnaped, but they told her that she was sold to them. She was the princess, now she is a maid. Her kidnappers are no other than a group of bandits. The leader of this group is cold and demanding, but with charming looks, many can not reject him. She, however, does. This draws him to her, hook him if anything. She works as a maid, doing what many of the bandits ask during the day, but at night she becomes his secret pleasure.

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