《The story of my love.》Важно.
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Всем привет. В данный момент мне необходимо мнение каждого, поэтому, огромнейшая просьба - выскажитесь в комментариях.
Итак, хочу признаться вам честно, я не очень довольна этой историей. Она слишком грязно написана. Очень много недописок и скомтости сюжета. Поэтому, хотела бы у вас спросить, стоит ли мне взяться за полное переписывание данной истории?
Надеюсь, что вам не безразлично это и вы ответите мне. Спасибо за внимание. Ваша Тина.
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