《Change the past?》Chapter 2: Revealation
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Wangji collected his guqin,sword and necessary objects from his room.
He dragged his heavy feet to the cave where he and Wei Ying had found the Yin Iron. His brother was waiting for him there.
"Wangji, please look after yourself," Xichen asked softly.
"I will Da-ge" Wangji grimaced, preparing himself to not see the sunlight for the next three years.
He took a step forward, and Xichen slowly watched him disappear out of sight.
Xichen sighed and unwillingly put up a barrier to the entrance of the cave.
Wangji gently set his items down and looked around the cave. His breath smoked in the cold air as he took in his surroundings.
"HI!"
Wangji immediately spun around in the direction of the voice.
But he relaxed as he saw it was the young girl who had saved him earlier.
"Thank you" he said bowing.
"Gah! No need! You're my a-niang! I'd do anything for you!" She replied, waving her hand around carelessly.
Wangji choked on air.
"A-niang?!" He questioned.
"Hehe yeah you're my a-niang! Biologically as well" she giggled lightly.
"My name is Wei Yingyue! And I unfortunately have managed to find myself in the past" she said scratching her head.
"Can I have some proof please?" He asked dazedly trying to process the information. Yingyue held up a Jade pendant.
"This was originally yours, you gave it to me on my 16th birthday, which was only a few days ago," she said, handing it over to him.
He inspected it slowly and found it was exactly the same as his.
"I believe you" he said slowly, "But I want you to gain my trust as well"
"Understood!" she said,smiling brightly.
"Okay story time! let's sit down," she said, crashing down inelegantly on the ground. Wangji just sat down gracefully.
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"Soo...how to begin"
(Insert the whole fiasco which is the untamed here)
Wangji just sat there in shock.
Wei Ying spirit lived through another by a sacrifice ritual?
And Jin Guanyao and Su She were the ones who had framed him in the first place?
And he married Wei Ying???
Well he knew he liked him anyway.. even before they got drunk one night and...
He quickly shook himself out of his reverie and pushed that thought to the back of his mind.
"How did you get here?" He asked.
Did she come here on purpose or by accident?
"Ehh.. you see I was playing hide and seek with the little kids in the sect, and a fierce corpse attacked us. I sent them back to their parents and tried to fight off the corpse." She said grimacing.
"But the second I touched the corpse a blue light enveloped me, and I found myself back in Gusu.
I was confused at first because I saw so many rules.
There is only 2500 rules in my time, but then I heard grand uncle's voice declaring your punishment, and that's when it clicked that I was definitely not supposed to be here."
She sighed gently.
"So I abandoned any common sense in that moment, and just ran to where you were," she said smiling at him.
"I must get something!" She said , standing up abruptly.
"You stay there, I'll be back in a sec!" She turned to smoke again.
How is she able to do that? He thought curiously.
'POOF" she reappeared beside him with a-
"-Bed,Yingyue really?" He deadpanned.
"You need it!" She protested.
"What do you mean?" Asked furrowing his eyebrows.
"Ehh.. you see.. well you're pregnant?" She mumbled, scuffing her feet on the ground. "What?! No!"
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"Ehh yeah you are I'm not joking a-niang" Yingyue said sadly.
"You had a miscarriage after you were whipped"
And that was the last thing Wangji heard before passing out.
When Wangji came back to consciousness, he was lying on the bed with a figure curled up beside him.
He gently placed his hand on his belly, and breathed deeply.
If she was telling the truth he must look after himself.
He turned his head to see her curled up to his side.
She clutched his robes in her sleep.
Wangji gently stroked her hair.
She looked soft, unlike the fierce warrior earlier that morning. He sighed and fell into dreamland.
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