《CRIMSON MOON (SHORT CHAPTERS)》Chapter 203: La Llorona y El Conquistador (The Weeping Lady and the Conqueror) part 4
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Morning rises and Marina runs back thinking: “Mis niños, they are waiting for me at the house, I told them that if anything happens we would meet at the house.”
“TRAIDORA! ATRAPENLA!” (TRAITOR…GET HER…)
Marina encounters survivors of the conquest; “Traitor, get out of here you are not welcome!!”
They begin to throw rocks at her but Marina only runs to see her children.
The moment she arrived at the house. Isabella has already sealed her children along with the Aztec Gods and disappeared. Marina arrived at her house but her children were not there. The conquest continued through the Aztec Empire, Cortes imprisoned Moctezuma. Guerra and Conquista lead the army, killing everyone who opposes them. Until Spain, colonize the New World.
Cortes returned with Martin Cortes, his son to Spain; he returned to the New World multiple times but never looked for Marina or her children….
As for Marina, she walked around asking for them, but she never found them. The natives rejected her calling her “Traitor, La Malinche or La Chingada” she became an outcast and persecuted by those who saw her that night. For one year she walked through the night saying:
“AAAAYYYY MMMIIISSSSS HIIIJJJOOOSSS”
People began to call her “la Llorona”, and began to fear her. Her hair became white, her skin dried as a skeleton because she stopped eating. Due to being exposed to the Golden Key’s mana, Marina got sick, but she never stopped looking for her children. Until one day she died however she never passed on. During the nights she walked around the country for 500 years screaming:
“AAAAYYYY MMMIIIISSS HHHHIIIIJJJJOOOSSS”
She takes away the children who were abandoned or she feels they need help and outs their souls in dolls so they won’t suffer. The island where she lived once with her family became abandoned under the name; Isla de las Muñecas (Island of the Dolls).
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Present…
(DRIP DRIP DROP DROP)
Rain continues to fall. Uriel sheds tears as Marina finishes telling her story:
“I see…so you lost everything that night…we are the same…I also lost my family, my father…my life in just one night…Although I will never understand your pain…I can promise you that I will help you…I will take you to your children…”
Marina smiles at him; “You have a pure heart boy, but such an evil Aura, whatever happened to you must have been tough.”
“Believe me, life has been difficult…however, I will always try to face them…and protect those who I care about…”
Marina, with tears coming out of her eyes, hugs Uriel; “Thank you.”
(SSSHHHIIINNNGGGG)
A bright light shines out of her and Uriel making it too bright that Marjorie and the kids cover their eyes. The light vanishes, Uriel was standing looking at the sky but Marina was missing. Uriel has her yellow eyes and tears flowing out of him.
Marjorie walks slowly towards Uriel saying; “Uriel is everything alright.” Uriel rubs his eyes, cleaning the tears and turns to see Marjorie; “Everything is alright Marjorie.” Uriel’s eyes return to normal, Marjorie smiles and looks around; “What happened to the ghost?”
“She’s gone for the moment…right now we need to return to the hotel and meet up with Kasumi.” Uriel replies, grabbing Marjorie’s hand. Majorie immediately turns red. Uriel looks at the tree behind him; “Come out Bella…I have a favor to ask you .”
Bella walks from the tree with her cat, laughing; “Well done muchacho…now go find her children!”
“I will…Can you please take care of the children over there.”
“I’m not a babysitter you know, but I’ll take them to their houses just this once.”
“Thank you, now we must go” Uriel opens a portal, he carries Marjorie with his arms; “Time to go…” Bella chuckles; “Wait, take her with you…” Bella summons a crow, the crow stands on his shoulder. Uriel sighs; “Very well…”
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Uriel and Marjorie cross the portal along with the crow. Bella looks at the children; “Time to return to your home…”
Bella snaps her fingers, the children disappear returning to their home. Bella looks at the moon:
“Juan, what an interesting successor you have…I will enjoy looking at his resolve…I wonder if he will break the curse of La Llorona…what do you think, Carla?”
Bella slowly transforms. The old woman turns into a younger appearance resembling a 35 year old woman. She has long red hair, hazel colored eyes, and a well-developed body with big breasts. She is wearing a long red dress, long red sleeves, high heels and a large red witch hat.
“Isabella, I think you are toying with them a lot…Meow!” Carla the cat chuckles. Isabella smiles as she opens a portal; “Now, time for us to move as well…”
Isabella and Carla walk into the portal and disappear.
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