《An Eldritch Horror Has Fallen in Love With Me and the Government Is Freaking Out?!》End of Part 2 (author comments)
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Thank you all for reaching the end of Part 2. I want to thank t̸̞͝h̶͕͋ë̷̯ ̵͍̓g̶̳̑r̵̲̔ȅ̸͙ā̶̭t̶̖͗ ̸̡̈b̴̞̾i̸̯̕g̵̖̊ ̷̞̋b̵̹̿l̶̡̈́à̸̻c̵̼̓k̶͕͛ ̸͕̚t̵̞̚h̸͙̽ȃ̵̧t̸̳͂ ̶̳̇ǵ̵̱ő̸̥ȅ̵̤s̴̟̒ ̸͓͑b̸͇͌ò̶̳o̴͕͐m̵̟͋ ̷̒ͅb̸̥̄o̵̜̿ȍ̸̘m̴̠͝ ̵̞͌b̴̹̈́o̷͓̽o̸̺̾m ediav42, NothingIsMagic, Brono10b, and P3rfectInsanity in particular for the comments you have made. Seeing reader comments fills me with a̶͎̕s̴̲̋h̸͕͒ ̸͉͒ĭ̴͕n̵̦͂ ̶̗̈m̶̥͠y̸̹͂ ̵̜̔m̸̲͐o̴͖͛ṳ̶͗t̸̳͒h̶͈͑ ̸͍̅à̷̤n̴̝͘d̴̻̀ ̸̬̄m̶̙̒y̸͖͊ ̴̦̓ḥ̵͝a̷̬̍n̵̘͋ḓ̴͝s̴͇̑ ̸̩̽a̷̪͆ň̷̝d̵͉̓ ̶̭̉w̵͎̒h̷̀ͅy̴̙̏ ̶͔̈w̸̫̄ö̴̢́n̸̦̈'̴̙̒t̵̙̆ ̶͍̇ḯ̸̠t̶̲̽ ̴͚̒d̶̜̒r̶̝͛y̴͇̋ so much motivation!
I had a lot of plans for Part 2, but a lot of them were scrapped. As I mentioned in an earlier note, I had planned for Petre's captivity to last longer. We would have learned more about the Special Entities throughout his time under Manya's b̶̠̅r̸̡͛ỉ̶͓g̶̘͒h̵͇̃t̴̹̄ ̵̜͐d̴́ͅe̴̐͜s̴̜̽t̷̓ͅṛ̴͊u̴̜͛c̷͇̑t̸̬̀i̶͙̾v̶̱̾e̶̟͛ ̸̪͝c̸͇̊ó̵ͅm̸͈̒ȩ̴̀d̷̺̀y̷̡͠ ̸̯̆s̴͇̈́ẖ̴͂o̵̢̾w care.
Originally, I had planned for the last chapter to be in Petre's perspective. He would have interacted with his little s̵͈͒ȅ̸̞ȇ̴̯d̶̼͒s̶̟͝ ̷̻̉o̷̝̚f̵̱̒ ̶͖͋ṱ̵̚h̸͚̀ȇ̶̞ ̴̱̋ë̴̺́n̷͓̈d̶͎͒ ̸͎̔f̸̰̀u̶͘ͅl̵̈ͅl̴̗̉ ̵̣̈́ő̴̠f̶̙̚ ̸̭̇a̷̧͝s̸̅͜h̴̀ͅ ̵͖̌á̴̼n̵̻̊d̶̜̕ ̸͚̌g̷̘̈́r̸͉͋a̸̼͘v̸̬͛e̵̡̋l̴̹̉ malformed children, but in the end I decided to use Blurb's perspective (and all that followed). I toyed with what Protocol AB-014 would entail for a while. At first it was going to be some high-tech gas because I wanted the city to be f̴͎̂u̴̘͂l̵̪̃l̶̡͠ ̵̞̓ȏ̷͙f̴̟̏ ̴̨̾l̷̩̀i̵͚͂a̴̝̓r̸̆ͅs̵̬̀ ̶͕͛a̶̼̍n̶̟̾d̸̛̤ ̷̮̈ţ̸͌ḥ̴́i̴͘ͅẻ̷̦v̶̲̑ě̸̘s̴͇̓ ̴͔̉a̷̯̿n̸̺̈́d̴̫͑ ̵̮̄a̷͖͠ş̸͌ḧ̸̢́e̴̦͘n̸͍͘ ̵͉͝s̴̗̄m̷͔̓i̴̥͆l̸̩̑e̶͖͝s̵͖͗ intact (but empty) for Part 3.
But then my plans for Part 3 changed, so the city did not have to be around anymore (or empty).
I am excited for the next section of An Eldritch Horror Has Fallen in Love.
Perhaps we will finally earn that r̴̡̃ę̶͑l̴͇̆i̵̢̅e̴͉͂f̵̠̔ ̷̦͑f̴̡́r̶̺͆o̴̻͂ṃ̶̀ ̶̪͊ṱ̸͆ḧ̶̜e̷̦̅ ̷͇͐w̴͉̓i̴̭͝d̸̡̊e̷͉̅ ̸̻̇s̷̠̕m̸̟̈́i̴͔̍l̶̦̑ę̸͂s̸̼͌ ̶͖̕ā̸̹n̸̺͌d̵͙͋ ̶̨̐g̴͈̔a̸̟̓ṕ̸͕-̴̳̊t̸̨͛ó̷̧o̷̯̓t̸̙̅ȟ̶͔è̴͉d̴͓̓ ̶̮͛ḽ̵̚i̶͉͊ḛ̵̕s̷̬͊ second reader review, wink wink nudge nudge. I have not seen Basket of Snake, the writer of our first review, in the comments recently, but I hope that they are f̴̪͑ṷ̸̀l̶͕͠ḷ̶͘ ̵͎̓ŏ̵̹f̵̟͗ ̸̝̽f̴̙̊ȋ̴̜r̸̼̍e̸̞̽ ̸͔͒ä̵͍́n̸͊ͅd̸̻͠ ̴̩̕a̴̧͒s̶̱͠h̴̹́ ̸̩̂a̷̲̽n̷͈̏ḏ̴̌ ̸͉̅ș̴̕ḭ̸́m̵͍̂p̷̩̆e̷̜͐ŕ̴̬ĭ̵̙n̸̻̈́g̵̳͐ ̷̺̎s̸̥̅m̸̜̓ȉ̵̠l̴̯̈́e̵̺͘s̸̡͆ still reading.
If not, I am confident that we will win them back with Part 3!
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