《Tales of Teleios》Moving Out Notice
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Dear All Readers,
Thanks for your time supporting and reading.
Especially to Justina, and all readers who had followed me all the way from Tapas to RR. After some discussion and analysis, I have a better plan for the future. As for Teleios, this is the 2nd edition, and if you had read the 1st edition on Tapas (which should no longer be available there), the 3rd edition will not be on RR. This 2nd edition will not be deleted at the moment, but I might need to remove it from the public if there's a call for it.
Some fixes I need to make on 3rd edition includes:
1. Agave's earlier chapters: I think she need more elaboration to show her true intention and her view on Arete. Else the story might show that she's simply a token "happy fat funny" character just for comedy. If read until the near latest chapter, Agave is to be revealed of her intention. I tried to narrate the ideology they hold, Agave being raised by Vitellus in Thebes, leading a life holding on the philosophy of Epicurus. Which I wonder how readers actually notice about Vitellus's kitchen and they are pretty much hidden everything behind their smiles, their great love of food and attitude of simply bow down to oppression.
2. Arctus and Peatrus, are the two characters need to fix in the 3rd edition. Mainly due to them being too much like disposable sides. That's not good story, and I do have a lot in mind for their stories. I've changed their name from 1st edition to make them unique.
3. Sporus become worsen in 2nd edition compare to 1st edition. As this is as intended. I decided not to bother about the transphobia call. Although I'm no JK Rowling, I'm happy enough to have supporting words from the trans community IRL who had voiced their support to me. Yes, they are not some online bots, but they are some real people. I don't need an online T-police to tell me what's wrong! In fact, the villainous idea on the character Sporus, and her development is important representative of late stage gender dysphoria, which is pretty much denied within trans community who had discriminate among themselves.
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-- As much as most trans people believe that they are 'born this way', no, late stage gender dysphoria is as real as early stage dysphoria. In many times, a person is forced to tell their story about having the dysphoria in their young age, simply to fit in and to get through religious enforcers.
My point is not about Female vs Transgendered Women as what JK Rowling had been debating about. But my debate is about Early dysphoria vs Late dysphoria. And if you read JUNO, the debate point I tried to bring to the discussion is about "should we cure our mind or our body?"
"Nobody is worse served by the activists who claimed to represent us than we are." IRL transgendered woman friend said.
"We want to survive, and be the survivor. We don't want to die just because some idiots thinks that we should label ourself biologically as XY." Another IRL transgendered woman who is in medical science said.
"Let me enjoy my life as a woman now! I don't want to get questioned on all those super masculine photos and videos of my past to haunt me. Let me had my late stage enlightenment and living in my present!" Another IRL transgendered woman who had late stage dysphoria said.
"A dick doesn't make a man!" Another IRL transgendered man said.
Last but not least, to those online trans-activist who had made so many bots and doubles to appear great, you're the worst piece of malignant shit ever!
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