Hello lovelies!

Good news: I’ve ironed some things out and should be set to resume as normal starting Friday the 17th.

I’ve made some minor adjustments to the story that I believe will make things easier/more interesting down the line. Here is a (none spoiler) list of what I’ve done for sake of clarity.

The Big Stuff:

Changed Ruslan’s name to Rhydian. His name didn’t quite fit the scheme of the rest of the Nar’Adai, so I wanted to address that. Mraize’s interlude in chapter eight has been completely rewritten. I wanted to go a different direction with him, so his section is the only one that’s been overhauled.

Small Stuff:

Tweaked chapter one. I’ve clarified the nature of the Veil, as I feel I made some contradictions/descriptions that didn’t quite make sense. Made minor grammatical corrections to chapters one through thirteen with the help of a few hawk-eyed readers.

See you Friday!

Sven