Okay this is going to be for people who have already read through my published but unedited chapters. Here is what I've changed:

Therin no longer seems to imply that Gau is immortal(it was just some strange wording)

The completely unfinished scene between Saina and Batman is now continued further and Batman now explains that Therin has many forces waiting in reserves and mentions the airship. Him and Saina now also bring The Friends nonlethal weapons for them to use.

Drauko still says 'reinforce deez nuts', except it seems like a tactical choice now because Kaleb is distracted with not chuckling at the haha funny 'joke'.

Drauko notes how they can bare through pain better because of the feeling of being side by side they gained after fusing.

Drauko notes that Luuko should have noticed just how tired Drade was, explaining why both of them have the weakness of seeking rest and a lack of stimulation.

Among many other small changes in the scene, Therin also wears headphones when he first speaks to The Great Mother.

He also refers to The Devourers by their name instead of as 'the grime'

Changes:

'It' will now be referred to as Law, for clarity's sake among other reasons.