《The Undying Emperor》4 - Discussion Chapter
Advertisement
You might have guessed but the last chapter was the end of act 4. Next week I will begin Act 5.
Was Act 4 perfect? Eh probably not. I probably would have done better to insert a set of chapters from Primarus' perspective and truly brought him to life to demonstrate the tragedy of the circumstances of his birth, but that would have prolonged the impression that it was a slave arc and even then, I didn't give as much attention to Lucius' self-reflection as would have been ideal.
These past few months have been utter turmoil for me as a creative. My day job situation changed completely. I started a youtube channel (http://youtube.com/@jameskrake you should sub, I'm trying to get it monetized so I can expand operations). I published my 5th book over on Amazon. Started a book club through my youtube channel (I've got a guilded server linked through my youtube).
I think at this point I can conclusively say that the spark of inspration for that sci-fi tower climber is gone. Like if a ton of people piled onto it, I still think it's a fun story, it just isn't as good as the other stuff I'm writing at the moment. Speaking of other stuff, I am actively recruiting beta readers, for all manuscripts I'm working on. That includes Undying Emperor, but also my cyberpunk series, one-offs, and a YA action series I'm trying to submit to a contest at the end of January. If anyone wants to volunteer, find your way over to my guilded server (https://www.guilded.gg/r/zzrRpJJ06E?i=dJr30KMd).
Rather than abandon UE and start over like I previously thought about, I've got a new idea. Because UE continues to be part of my creative life and I don't want to ditch it, in 2024 what I plan to do is write a stand alone novel in the world of UE that I will self-pub to Amazon et al. It won't be required reading for this story but it will be supplementary, so my plan is to write a top notch story and hope to bridge this gap between people who know me here and people who think I just self-pub sci-fi. The general premise is that I'm going to write this world's equivalent to Shakespeare's plays, to create a bit of tie in while also writing a fundamentally solid story people will enjoy.
Advertisement
Next week will be the act 5 foreword and I've already got a backlog going for the new plot arc. I'm enjoying it a lot. I hope you'll indulge the same kind of stuff that I did in Act 2.
What do you all think of the new cover?
And of course, this is the post where I encourage you to let me know how you're feeling about the story and I certainly encourage you to begin speculating about where the story is going. I've had quite a few people talk to me about Fallen Crest Abbey and learned that the ending eludes most people. I actually plan to upload a video discussing the issues with writing epistolery to my youtube channel and dissect the side-story there. It is quite possibly my favorite writing as a creator, even though I know it's not the most marketable or enjoyable to the average reader.
Regardless, I want to continue expanding my reach. I want to sell more good stories to people (and I think I'm getting a hell of a lot better at certain key aspects). I've got ideas for merch, for game show live streams, and eventually I want to get into comics, board games even.
Thank you for reading this far. The comments and engagement really mean a lot to me.
Advertisement
- In Serial43 Chapters
A Pirate's Life for Mei
In the future, prisoners are no longer kept in traditional prisons. They're put into comas and permanently dwell within realistic, full-dive virtual worlds. Mei is a journalist and activist falsely convicted of political crimes after accusing an official of sexual harassment. She finds herself in chains aboard a ship in the Caribbean, a prison realm set in 1675, in the age of sail. Oversight is corrupt and the guards are violent. While most prisoners sullenly endure their hardship, Mei knows that this world has a loophole: prisoners can buy their freedom — if they can get the gold. And this also happens to be the golden age of piracy. Yo ho, yo ho. It's a pirate's life for Mei. Book 1 Mei arrives in the Caribbean and battles for her freedom against the devilish English navy, is kidnapped by Caribs, and comes face-to-face with a jaguar. She recruits fellow prisoners in an attempt to steal a boat and flee the prison colony. Book 2 Mei and her crew arrive in Sint Maartin and learn that the French and the Dutch are at war! As Lance, Juan, and Cheeto face their pasts, the crew becomes privateers. Their first prize: a ship full of rum and a week of drunken debauchery in Curacao. This puts them on the trail of Aztec gold buried deep in jungle ruins. An adventure filled with doublecrosses and stealing their first true ship! This is the All Ages version. Mature content is available on Patreon.
8 218 - In Serial58 Chapters
Nirvana
A young martial arts learner named Emile has been training with his father to grow stronger. His father has always forced him to keep improving or he will not have the strength to revive his family. Watch as Emile faces turbulent times and hardships, all correlated with the Virtual Reality game known as Nirvana.
8 170 - In Serial44 Chapters
Master of divine blood
The hero finds himself in an empty white space. He does not remember himself and does not understand what is happening. The sweet voice of a girl with maternal care tells him about rebirth. Everyone who fulfilled their Great Dream on Earth gets here to choose abilities and become stronger.Superior beings act in a special space, but can also return to Earth. They are waiting for the conquest of 9 worlds of the dragon necklace.The hero receives only 12 points for choosing the ability, but the weakest costs 15. A sweet voice helps him cope with this problem. Having no memory of himself, the MC retained the principles of personality, so he joyfully plunges into a new world for him. But a series of strange coincidences shows that he fell into a certain conspiracy ...---------------If you are a lover of novels and have been reborn in such a magical way, is it not natural to think of the world as a fairy tale? Yes? Then you do not know how terrible the tales are in the original version. Embark on a journey with the hero to find out the hidden "Truth about the world"PS: The world of history is strictly thought out and obeys its laws. It has a history and development. Some readers may find it difficult at the beginning due to many terms. I know that many are tired of super-lucky heroes. As soon as they need something, they immediately receive it. This story is different. Everything has a reason.
8 111 - In Serial44 Chapters
To be an Immortal Lich
Meet our friendly protagonist, who finds himself in a whole new world, inhabiting the body of a not so friendly, powerful lich. Unfortunately for him, the fantasy like world doesn't exactly start off full of modern amenities, a plethora of fun activities, easy to find pretty women, or exquisite cuisine. Instead, he finds himself in the middle of the ruins of his predecessor's past, and so begins his foray into a world familiar yet changed beyond the memories he gained. In the processs, he will learn what it means to be a lich and maybe even forge his own legend.
8 168 - In Serial10 Chapters
Blue blood Jack Frost x reader
You and Jack may not know Each Other yet , but when you do it's a whole different story .
8 190 - In Serial10 Chapters
the red sunset: jihyo x Daniel story
the following scenes are not real .but some of them are .main characters:park jihyo kang Daniel twice wanna one don't mind please if u see any grammar mistakes. because English is not my native language soooooo hope u enjoy it (@,@)
8 234

